【名师画板】有的同学作文的篇幅写得很长,自认为感觉不错,可细读之后,就会发现漏洞百出。你看这篇文章的小作者,他自认为是把自己的幸福展示给别人,但幸福具体是怎样呈现的,交代不是十分清楚。应把父母 [Teacher’s Sketchpad] Some students write long writing space, think they feel good, can be read carefully, you will find flaws. You see the author of this article, he considered himself to show their happiness to others, but how the specific happiness is presented, the account is not very clear. Parents should be