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大家好,今天我们又相会在作文QQ站了!刚从考场判卷回来,我现在急于把记叙文的丢分点告诉大家——那就是不少考生在记叙文写作中平铺直叙：写人让人难见其人,更别说凸现人物形象；记事干瘪,像个“瘪三”,让人一览无余。其实,文章多一些波澜,多一些起伏,多一些回旋曲折,这样才能吸引读者的阅读兴致,才能受到阅卷老师的青睐。为此,笔者特邀浙江大学的张强同学做客聊天室,谈谈“如何让记叙文多点波澜”。
Hello, everyone, today we met again in the essay QQ station! Just returned from the examination room sentence, I am now eager to tell everyone about the narrative points - that is, many candidates in the narrative writing in the writing straightforward: write people difficult See him, let alone highlight the character’s image; the memo is dry, like a “Jisan”, which gives you an unobstructed view. In fact, the article is more ups and downs, more ups and downs, more twists and turns, so as to attract the reader’s interest in reading, can be subject to the rating teacher’s favor. For this reason, the author specially invited Zhang Qiang of Zhejiang University to be a guest chat room and talk about “how to make the narrative more ambiguous”.