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中考作文阅卷评分标准规定:一类卷优秀作文必须内容充实,描写生动。但在阅卷和平时作文的评改中,老师们发现不少同学的作文都存在描述(内容)空洞的毛病,原因在哪里呢?根据笔者多年的作文教学经验,发现主要原因在以下这些方面:一、不善仔细观察;二、缺乏生活体验;三、描述概念化;四、不懂得描述的策略;五、不懂得大处着眼,细处用力。所谓不善仔细观察,就是观察事物时没有明确的目的,走马观花,不懂得有选择、有重点、
Senior high school entrance examination score marking standards: a volume of excellent writing must be substantial, vivid description. However, in the evaluation of essay writing and peacetime essay writing, teachers found that many students’ essays have a description of the problem (content). What are the reasons? According to my years of writing teaching experience, I found that the main reasons are as follows: , Poorly observed; Second, the lack of life experience; Third, describe the conceptualization; Fourth, do not know the description of the strategy; Fifth, do not know the big picture, detail hard. The so-called poor careful observation, that is, there is no clear purpose of observing things, cursory, do not know how to choose, there is focus,