写作讲求内容的真实性,但一字不漏地复制现实材料,有些就显得平淡无奇。因为生活中精彩的故事不多,或者是我们没有留心而失之交臂。那么写作该怎样才能让文章精彩动人呢?下面我们来看一学生习作《收买》的修改前后,或许从中能受到一定的教益。【原作展示】收买湖北/黄海英今天是星期天,爸爸妈妈很早有事出门,临走时交代:“认真学习,不准做其他任何事情。” Writing emphasizes the authenticity of the content, but literally copying the actual material, and some seem unimpressive. Because there are not many wonderful stories in life, or we missed it without paying attention. Then how can we make the article attractive and moving? Here we look at a student’s work before and after the “Acquisition” changes, perhaps from the lessons learned. [Original display] Buying Hubei/Huang Haiying is Sunday today. Mom and Dad go out early and have something to do. When they leave, they confessed: “Conscientiously study, do not allow to do anything else.”