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一年有四个季节，春、夏、秋、冬，我们可以享受四季带给我们的不同快乐。请以“My Favorite Season”为题，谈谈你最喜欢的季节是什么，并讲出原因。
要求：1.写出结构完整、内容充实、意思连贯、语法准确、语言丰富优美、可读性强的短文。2. 至少60词。
There are four seasons in a year. Anyway， my favorite season is spring.
As the saying goes， “A year’s plan starts with spring.”In the fields， everything begins to grow. Trees turn green， and flowers start to come out. In spring， people take off their heavy clothes and enjoy the warmness and sunshine. Many people love this season of year， because it is good for sports. We can go hiking during this season. Also， we can go on a picnic with our friends. We have colorful view from here and there.
These are the reasons why I like spring. Spring gives us a lot of fun and pleasure.
【简评】本文出自一名七年级学生之手，写作思路清晰，结构完整，首尾段呼应主题。中间段介绍春季，语句优美，季节特点抓得准，描写细致。能恰当地运用关联词语，语句连接紧密，是一篇优秀的学生习作。
指导教师：田卓
要求：1.写出结构完整、内容充实、意思连贯、语法准确、语言丰富优美、可读性强的短文。2. 至少60词。
There are four seasons in a year. Anyway， my favorite season is spring.
As the saying goes， “A year’s plan starts with spring.”In the fields， everything begins to grow. Trees turn green， and flowers start to come out. In spring， people take off their heavy clothes and enjoy the warmness and sunshine. Many people love this season of year， because it is good for sports. We can go hiking during this season. Also， we can go on a picnic with our friends. We have colorful view from here and there.
These are the reasons why I like spring. Spring gives us a lot of fun and pleasure.
【简评】本文出自一名七年级学生之手，写作思路清晰，结构完整，首尾段呼应主题。中间段介绍春季，语句优美，季节特点抓得准，描写细致。能恰当地运用关联词语，语句连接紧密，是一篇优秀的学生习作。
指导教师：田卓