本文所举的例句,例1取自《新民晚报》,例5是影片《狼行拂晓》主题歌的一句歌词,其余的均来自《沈阳日报》。 1.船员们目睹一场鱿鲸生死大战的惊心动魄的场面,其结果这两个庞然大物一起同归于尽。 “同”与“一起”语意重复,后者当删。(句中其他语病暂不评析) 2.这时时间是8时45分。 The examples cited in this article, example 1 is taken from “Xinmin Evening News”, Example 5 is the lyrics of the film “wolf dawn” a song lyrics, the rest are from “Shenyang Daily.” 1. The crew watched a thrilling scene of the squid whale life-and-death battle, with the result that the two behemoths fell together. “Same” and “together” semantic repetition, the latter when deleted. (Other sentences in the sentence not to comment temporarily) 2. At this time is 8:45.