Dear Ms. Butler， My name is Anna. I am a middle school student. It takes me only about ten minutes to get the Animal Center by subway. I really love animals and I would like to help them. I believe I can become a good helper. Because I have some medical knowledges. I want to be a International Animal Helpers volunteer. Can you choose me？
　　Best wishes！
　　Anna
　　李 红老师点评：
　　这是一篇应用文习作，内容是根据所给信息写一封申请信。从整体来说有以下优点：1. 书信格式正确。2. 所给信息点全部用上。3. 句子基本上连贯、通顺，能准确表达意思，并且没有太多拼写或语法错误。4. 能运用所学的短语及句型，如：by subway； would like； want to be； It takes sb. some time to do sth. 但习作仍有一些不足之处：1. 语篇逻辑有点乱，应先写申请成为志愿者的句子，再陈述理由， 并且可加上过渡词，如：first， second， third。2. 语法错误：a International Animal Helpers volunteer 应为 an International Animal Helpers volunteer； some knowledges 应为some knowledge，因为knowledge 是不可数名词；Because 处是原因状语从句，应小写，前面用逗号。3. 最后一句有点中式英语。
　　Dear Ms. Butler， My name is Anna. I am a middle school student. I know you need a volunteer from the newspaper. I want to be an International Animal Helpers volunteer. I have some reasons. First， I really love animals and I would like to help them. Second， I have some medical knowledge， so I believe I can become a good helper. Third， it takes me only about ten minutes to get the Animal Center by subway. Would you like to give me a chance？
　　Best wishes！
　　Anna