我看过几本已经出版的新编县志,看过一些新编县志的稿子,觉得志书(稿)语言文字主流是好的,但也有些方面可以商榷。随看随记,写成《志书(稿)语言十忌》读志笔记一篇,愿与修志同志切磋商讨,以进一步提高新编志书的语言水平。一、忌赘词冗句志书要用非常浓缩、精炼的语言去记叙事物,使一定数量的篇幅,能容纳尽量多的内容,即所谓“文约事丰”。有些志稿,赘 I have read several new county magazines that have been published. I read some drafts of the new county magazines and I feel that the mainstream version of the journal (draft) language is good. However, there are some aspects that can be discussed. As read and recorded, written as “Shizhu (draft) language ten bogey,” a note to read the blog, willing to discuss with the discussion of Comrade Chi, in order to further improve the new book language proficiency. First, avoidance of redundant words Zhi Zhi to use very concentrated, refined language to narrative, so that a certain amount of space, to accommodate as much content, the so-called “Wen Feng things.” Some Zhizhuan, superfluous