作品(一)此作最大的问题在于格调较低,根源则在于用笔。书法的点画无论大小,都由起笔、行笔、收笔三个动作完成,起笔和收笔使得气息内敛、厚重,而行笔则要拿捏有度,笔按得太狠线质则单薄、出现片状,在格调上则会出现蓬头垢面的村夫气,笔提得太过线质则纤弱无力、轻浮软塌,气息显得纤弱犹如病态。因此健康的书写状态才能带来作品气息的纯正。此幅作品大部分用笔按得太狠,显得局促、粗糙,建议作者加强小篆的练习,以增加作 Works (A) The biggest problem with this is the lower style, the root cause is to use the pen. No matter the size of the calligraphy, all from the pen, line pen, close the pen to complete the three moves, starting pen and close the pen makes introverted, heavy, while the pen will have to handle the degree, the pen is too hard lineage is thin, appear Flaky, in the style will be unkempt village gentry, pen mention too much line quality is weak, frivolous soft collapse, the breath seems delicate like a pathological. Therefore, a healthy state of writing can bring pure flavor of the work. Most of this work is too hard with a pen, appears cramped, rough, suggest that the author strengthen Xiaozhuan practice to increase for