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I finished the last test-the English test just now. I am relaxed and happy now. But I am also a little bit sad. Because I’ll leave school soon.
The three years in the school is colorful.The first year I was ignorant. I didn’t know anything about the life and study in a middle school. At first I was so quiet that I didn’t have any friends. I felt lonely. Luckily， the friendly classmates and teachers helped me out. I began to become outgoing and had a few friends. Especially， my study improved a lot. The passed year was busy and every student felt tired and nervous. We helped each other and encouraged each other. We had many things to do， but we felt happy. Zhongkao was like a fearful war and all of us knew that we must win！ We spent a lot of time studying. Wherever we stayed at that time， we were always talking about our study. We were really crazy about it， weren’t we？
We have finished the most important exams. It is time to say goodbye to Daotian Middle School. Before Zhongkao， I coudn’t wait for the summer vacation. But now I am afraid of it. Because I don’t want to leave the school.
How time flies！ The three years has gone by but it is so beautiful and unforgettable. I won’t forget everything in Daotian Middle School.
Goodbye， my favourite school！
王泉老师点评：
本文作者巧妙地利用走出考场的特殊时间与特殊心理，运用细腻的心理描写，将即将毕业时的激动与不舍，以及对学校的爱与对以往学习生活的怀念展现得淋漓尽致。文章采用了初中学过的各种句式，运用了对比、比喻等修辞手法，恰当妥帖，让文章生彩不少！
The three years in the school is colorful.The first year I was ignorant. I didn’t know anything about the life and study in a middle school. At first I was so quiet that I didn’t have any friends. I felt lonely. Luckily， the friendly classmates and teachers helped me out. I began to become outgoing and had a few friends. Especially， my study improved a lot. The passed year was busy and every student felt tired and nervous. We helped each other and encouraged each other. We had many things to do， but we felt happy. Zhongkao was like a fearful war and all of us knew that we must win！ We spent a lot of time studying. Wherever we stayed at that time， we were always talking about our study. We were really crazy about it， weren’t we？
We have finished the most important exams. It is time to say goodbye to Daotian Middle School. Before Zhongkao， I coudn’t wait for the summer vacation. But now I am afraid of it. Because I don’t want to leave the school.
How time flies！ The three years has gone by but it is so beautiful and unforgettable. I won’t forget everything in Daotian Middle School.
Goodbye， my favourite school！
王泉老师点评：
本文作者巧妙地利用走出考场的特殊时间与特殊心理，运用细腻的心理描写，将即将毕业时的激动与不舍，以及对学校的爱与对以往学习生活的怀念展现得淋漓尽致。文章采用了初中学过的各种句式，运用了对比、比喻等修辞手法，恰当妥帖，让文章生彩不少！