高中生的记叙文写作,要想写得具体生动,情趣横生,就要学会描写。采用什么手法描写,笔者试谈几点不成熟的意见。一、借具体事物的描写,来取代抽象概念有一篇《节之美》的文章写道——有一种树,不管狂飚怎样欺压,冰雹怎样蹂躏,闪电怎样鞭挞,雷霆怎样轰炸,它总是不屈不挠,顽强地生长骨节。即便刀砍斧剁,倒下身躯,也要发出铜之音,金之韵;即便烈火焚烧,红焰炙烤,化成灰烬,也要保持原始的骨骼。有一种马,驮着忠肝义胆,奔赴疆场。超影绝尘,撞破敌阵;风驰电掣,撕开重围。刀光剑影中,掘一条血色河流。当将军夜 High school students’ narrative writing, to write vivid, fun, we must learn to describe. Using what techniques to describe, I talk about a few immature opinions. First, to replace the abstract concept by the description of specific things There is an article entitled “beauty of festival” - there is a kind of tree, no matter how oppressed the Biao Biao, how the devastation of Hail, how lightning flogged, Thunder how to bomb, it is always indomitable , Tenaciously growing joints. Even if the knife chop ax, body down, but also to issue the sound of copper, gold rhyme; even if the fire burning, red roasted, into the ashes, but also to maintain the original bone. There is a horse, laden with loyalty and righteousness, rushed to the battlefield. Super shadow of the dust, breaking the enemy array; Paizhuanzhuan, tear encirclement. Swords, dig a bloody river. When generals night