今天又是作文点评课。课堂上,我将四段文字发布到大屏幕上:A:只见唐老师手臂一挥,《春天》的齐奏开始了。悠扬的二胡声、悦耳的提琴声、节奏鲜明的手风琴声、美妙的电子琴声,交织在一起。我感到我陶醉了。B:江南的水,江南的桥,江南的房子,江南的人……各具情态,令人如痴如醉。C:多么迷人的落日!多么瑰丽的晚霞!我对着西方的天空,陶醉了。D:在弹得动听的时候,他陶醉了,我们也陶醉了。 Today is a composition review class. In class, I posted four paragraphs to the big screen: A: I saw Teacher Tang’s arm waved and the “Spring” started in unison. Melodious sound of the erhu, melodious violin sound, rhythmic accordion sound, beautiful sound organ, intertwined. I feel I am intoxicated. B: Jiangnan water, Jiangnan bridge, Jiangnan house, Jiangnan people ...... Each modality, mesmerizing. C: What a charming sunset! What a magnificent sunset! I was intoxicated with the sky in the west. D: He was intoxicated when he was playing, and we were intoxicated.