[习作原生态]家访浙江省瑞安市塘下镇起点文学社林劲博早上9点多,爸爸从菜市场拎了一大袋水果回来,跟我说:“杨老师要来家访。”我的心里怦怦直跳:刚放暑假,杨老师来干什么?(这里需要增加心理活动的描写,突出忐忑不安的感觉,为下文表达的感动之情做好铺垫。) [Original] home visit Ruian City, Zhejiang Province Tangxia starting point literary community Lin Jin Bo 9 o’clock in the morning, my father brought a bag of fruit from the vegetable market back, told me: “Yang came to visit home.” "My heart怦 怦 跳:: just put the summer vacation, Yang teacher to do? (Here need to increase the description of psychological activity, highlighting uneasy feeling, paving the way for the following expression of moved.)