我平时最喜欢踢球了,只要一有空,我总要跟同学们踢上一阵子。《哎,好险哪!》这篇文章就是我和同学们下课踢球的一个片段。通过写这篇习作,我的收获还真不少呢!我认为要写好一个精彩的活动片段应该注意以下几点:首先,要选择写什么。在动笔之前,我先把整个踢球的过程像放电影一样 I usually like to play football, as long as free, I always have to play with my classmates for a while. “Hey, good insurance!” This article is a fragment of my class and classmates playing football. By writing this exercise, I really learned a lot! I think to write a wonderful activity clips should note the following: First, you have to choose what to write. Before writing, I first play the whole process like a movie