《义务教育语文课程标准》提出:“写作是运用语言文字进行表达和交流的重要方式,是认识世界、认识自我、创造性表述的过程。”习作教学是语文教学不可或缺的重要组成部分,它不仅是小学素质教育的重要内容和有效载体,而且也是提高语文素养新的“能力增长点”。因此,如何提高学生写作能力也备受人们的关注。对于小学生来讲,习作是一道难关,怎样才能帮孩子们顺利渡过这个关口,习作点评至关重要。随着现代化教育技术的更新,多媒体技术早已引入到了课堂, The Compulsory Education Curriculum Standard states: “Writing is an important way of expressing and communicating in spoken and written language, and it is a process of knowing the world, knowing oneself and creatively.” “Learning teaching is an indispensable part of Chinese teaching It is not only an important content and effective carrier of quality education in primary schools, but also a new ”point of capability growth" for improving Chinese literacy. Therefore, how to improve students’ writing ability has also attracted people’s attention. For primary school students, learning is a difficult task. How can we help our children get through this point? Commenting is crucial. With the update of modern educational technology, multimedia technology has been introduced to the classroom,