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简评:作者向我们真实地呈现了一出家庭情景剧,这样的故事在每个家庭都上演着,在我们的社会上演着。只是很多同学没有留意,甚至在浮躁的文风影响下大家不属于这类题材。这个作者很熟悉家庭生话,珍惜这类题材。首先叙述干干净净,众多人物条理分明,各自的语言行动适合各自的年龄身份。太奶奶好玩,奶奶上有老下有小。爷爷做自己能做的事……五盒糕点,家庭百态。其次是客观叙述,故事原原本本端上来,不加一字点评,没有任何倾向,民间俚俗、凡人心态,让你自己去琢磨“家”的味儿。
Comment: The author presents to us a real family melodrama, such a story staged in each family, acting in our society. Just a lot of classmates did not pay attention, even under the influence of impetuous style of writing we do not belong to this type of subject matter. This author is familiar with family life, cherish this type of subject matter. First described clean, many people clearly structured, their respective language actions for their own age status. Granny fun, Granny has a small old man. Grandpa do what he can do ... ... five boxes of pastries, home state of the art. Followed by the objective description, the story originally came from the end, without word comment, no inclination, folk vulgar, mortal mentality, let yourself pondering the “home” taste.