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英语书面表达是反映同学们英语运用水平的重要环节，本人在高考阅卷后的感受就是：考生的英语写作能力还有待于大幅度地提高。为此，笔者仅以考生书面表达中出现的典型错误为例，进行归纳和分析，并结合自己的教学实践提出一些个人的应对策略，希望对大家有些帮助和启发。
1. 今天我很早就起床了。
误： Today I get up very early.
析：从语境分析，“起床”应该是在说话之前，故应该用一般过去时态。
正： Today I got up very early.
2. 他一直步行到海滩。
误： He walked as far as to the beach.
析： as far as已含有“远至某地”的意思，因此as far as之后不必再加介词to。
正： He walked as far as the beach.
3. 当你走进去时，你就会看见许多放满了不同学科书籍的书架。
误： When you got inside， you will see many shelves full of books of different subjects.
析：当主句为一般将来时的时候，时间状语从句中的动词应用一般现在时态。
正： When you get inside， you will see many shelves full of books of different subjects.
4. 他坐在桌旁。
误： He seated at the desk.
析： seat作动词时是及物动词，后面要跟宾语，即seat sb/oneself， 而sit为不及物动词。
正： He seated himself at the desk. /He was seated at the desk. /He sat at the desk.
5. 我的钱包丢了。
误： My wallet lost.
析： lose是及物动词，钱包应该是“被丢了”，所以要用被动语态。
正： My wallet is lost. /My wallet has been lost.
6. 他献身于航天事业。
误： He devoted to the space flight.
析： devote为及物动词，“献身”通常用devote oneself to或be devoted to表达。
正： He was devoted to the space flight. /He devoted himself to the space flight.
7. 这本书很好卖。
误： This book is sold well.
析：从意义上讲，书是被卖，该用被动语态。但sell加上副词表示主语的性质时， sell为半系动词，所以应该用主动形式表示被动意义。
正： This book sells well.
8. 无论何时，只要需要帮助，我都愿意伸出援助之手。
误： I’m ready to give help whenever it needs.
析： it代指帮助，“需要帮助”应该理解为“别人需要帮助”，所以“帮助”就应该“被需要”。
正： I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed.
9. 我愿意和你交朋友。
误： I’d like to make a friend with you.
析： make friends with sb是固定短语， friends必须是复数形式。
正： I’d like to make friends with you.
10. 电子游戏很受学生的欢迎。
误： Video games is very popular with students.
析：由于主语是复数，所以谓语动词应该用复数形式。
正： Video games are very popular with students.
11. 护士正忙于照料伤员。
误： The nurse was busy tending to the wounded soldiers.
析：在本句中， tend表示“照顾，照料”与attend同义，用作及物动词，后直接跟宾语，不带介词to。 而tend to则表示“倾向，趋向”。例如： Modern camera design tends to simplicity. 现代照相机设计得越来越简单。
正： The nurse was busy tending the wounded soldiers.
12. 他爸爸每天都是骑车上班。
误： He’s father goes to work by bike every day.
析：“他爸爸”是“他的爸爸”的意思，因此he’s应该改成his。 很明显，此句混淆了he’s与his的意思。
正： His father goes to work by bike every day.
13. 上学期她教我们英语。
误： Last term she taught our English.
析： teach要求带双宾语，所以应该把our改成us。
正： Last term she taught us English.
14. 有数以百计的学生因为穷而不能上学。
误： There were hundreds of students couldn’t go to school because they were poor. 析：此句子是受汉语的影响，忽略了英语的基本句子结构。
正： Hundreds of students couldn’t go to school because they were poor. /There were hundreds of students who couldn’t go to school because they were poor.
15. 他妈妈病了三天了。
误： His mother has fallen ill for three days.
析： fallen ill是非延续性动词，不能跟表示一段时间的时间状语连用，所以应该把fallen改成been。
正： His mother has been ill for three days.
16. 工人们欢迎我们来参观农场。
误： The workers warmly welcomed us to visit the farm.
析：“欢迎”在汉语中有两个意思：高兴地迎接；乐意接受。这句话的意思是：“当我们到农场时，工人们高兴地接待我们。”英语中没有welcome sb to do sth这个句型结构。汉语中的“欢迎某人做某事”中的“欢迎”是“乐意接受”之意。如果用英语来表达，则用“be welcome to do sth.”， 这里welcome是形容词。例如：欢迎他随时到这儿来住。 He is welcome to stay here whenever he likes.
正： The workers gave us a warm welcome when we arrived at the farm.
17. 第二天早上，在他上学的路上，他看到天空中飞着许多鸟儿。
误： The second morning， on his way to school， he saw in the sky some birds flying.
析：本句是受汉语影响的结果。“第二天早上”在英语中应该表达为“the next morning”， in the sky是状语，最好放在句末。
正： The next morning on his way to school， he saw some birds flying in the sky.
18. 使他高兴的是，他的爷爷同意了。
误： To make him happy， his grandpa agreed.
析：“使他高兴的是”英语中应该表达为： To his delight。 本句的意思是“为了使他高兴，他爷爷同意了。”意思完全变了。
正： To his delight， his grandpa agreed.
19. 只有这样，我们才能有足够的精力搞好学习。
误： Only in this way we can have enough energy to study better.
析：按照英语的习惯“only + 状语”位于句首时，句子要部分倒装。
正： Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
20. 总之，读原著比看根据原著改编的电影好。
误： In a word， read the original work is better than see the film based on it.
析：“读原著”在句中充当主语，因此，应该用动词的不定式或ing形式。
正： In a word， to read/reading the original work is better than see the film based on it.
1. 今天我很早就起床了。
误： Today I get up very early.
析：从语境分析，“起床”应该是在说话之前，故应该用一般过去时态。
正： Today I got up very early.
2. 他一直步行到海滩。
误： He walked as far as to the beach.
析： as far as已含有“远至某地”的意思，因此as far as之后不必再加介词to。
正： He walked as far as the beach.
3. 当你走进去时，你就会看见许多放满了不同学科书籍的书架。
误： When you got inside， you will see many shelves full of books of different subjects.
析：当主句为一般将来时的时候，时间状语从句中的动词应用一般现在时态。
正： When you get inside， you will see many shelves full of books of different subjects.
4. 他坐在桌旁。
误： He seated at the desk.
析： seat作动词时是及物动词，后面要跟宾语，即seat sb/oneself， 而sit为不及物动词。
正： He seated himself at the desk. /He was seated at the desk. /He sat at the desk.
5. 我的钱包丢了。
误： My wallet lost.
析： lose是及物动词，钱包应该是“被丢了”，所以要用被动语态。
正： My wallet is lost. /My wallet has been lost.
6. 他献身于航天事业。
误： He devoted to the space flight.
析： devote为及物动词，“献身”通常用devote oneself to或be devoted to表达。
正： He was devoted to the space flight. /He devoted himself to the space flight.
7. 这本书很好卖。
误： This book is sold well.
析：从意义上讲，书是被卖，该用被动语态。但sell加上副词表示主语的性质时， sell为半系动词，所以应该用主动形式表示被动意义。
正： This book sells well.
8. 无论何时，只要需要帮助，我都愿意伸出援助之手。
误： I’m ready to give help whenever it needs.
析： it代指帮助，“需要帮助”应该理解为“别人需要帮助”，所以“帮助”就应该“被需要”。
正： I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed.
9. 我愿意和你交朋友。
误： I’d like to make a friend with you.
析： make friends with sb是固定短语， friends必须是复数形式。
正： I’d like to make friends with you.
10. 电子游戏很受学生的欢迎。
误： Video games is very popular with students.
析：由于主语是复数，所以谓语动词应该用复数形式。
正： Video games are very popular with students.
11. 护士正忙于照料伤员。
误： The nurse was busy tending to the wounded soldiers.
析：在本句中， tend表示“照顾，照料”与attend同义，用作及物动词，后直接跟宾语，不带介词to。 而tend to则表示“倾向，趋向”。例如： Modern camera design tends to simplicity. 现代照相机设计得越来越简单。
正： The nurse was busy tending the wounded soldiers.
12. 他爸爸每天都是骑车上班。
误： He’s father goes to work by bike every day.
析：“他爸爸”是“他的爸爸”的意思，因此he’s应该改成his。 很明显，此句混淆了he’s与his的意思。
正： His father goes to work by bike every day.
13. 上学期她教我们英语。
误： Last term she taught our English.
析： teach要求带双宾语，所以应该把our改成us。
正： Last term she taught us English.
14. 有数以百计的学生因为穷而不能上学。
误： There were hundreds of students couldn’t go to school because they were poor. 析：此句子是受汉语的影响，忽略了英语的基本句子结构。
正： Hundreds of students couldn’t go to school because they were poor. /There were hundreds of students who couldn’t go to school because they were poor.
15. 他妈妈病了三天了。
误： His mother has fallen ill for three days.
析： fallen ill是非延续性动词，不能跟表示一段时间的时间状语连用，所以应该把fallen改成been。
正： His mother has been ill for three days.
16. 工人们欢迎我们来参观农场。
误： The workers warmly welcomed us to visit the farm.
析：“欢迎”在汉语中有两个意思：高兴地迎接；乐意接受。这句话的意思是：“当我们到农场时，工人们高兴地接待我们。”英语中没有welcome sb to do sth这个句型结构。汉语中的“欢迎某人做某事”中的“欢迎”是“乐意接受”之意。如果用英语来表达，则用“be welcome to do sth.”， 这里welcome是形容词。例如：欢迎他随时到这儿来住。 He is welcome to stay here whenever he likes.
正： The workers gave us a warm welcome when we arrived at the farm.
17. 第二天早上，在他上学的路上，他看到天空中飞着许多鸟儿。
误： The second morning， on his way to school， he saw in the sky some birds flying.
析：本句是受汉语影响的结果。“第二天早上”在英语中应该表达为“the next morning”， in the sky是状语，最好放在句末。
正： The next morning on his way to school， he saw some birds flying in the sky.
18. 使他高兴的是，他的爷爷同意了。
误： To make him happy， his grandpa agreed.
析：“使他高兴的是”英语中应该表达为： To his delight。 本句的意思是“为了使他高兴，他爷爷同意了。”意思完全变了。
正： To his delight， his grandpa agreed.
19. 只有这样，我们才能有足够的精力搞好学习。
误： Only in this way we can have enough energy to study better.
析：按照英语的习惯“only + 状语”位于句首时，句子要部分倒装。
正： Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
20. 总之，读原著比看根据原著改编的电影好。
误： In a word， read the original work is better than see the film based on it.
析：“读原著”在句中充当主语，因此，应该用动词的不定式或ing形式。
正： In a word， to read/reading the original work is better than see the film based on it.