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写作离不开收集材料,但原始材料是不能原封不动地照搬进作文的。要怎样处理材料呢?我们可以通过“添油加醋”的方法来实现。下面,我们结合一个例子进行讲解。先看原始材料:说比喻句的游戏开始了,首先小东说明喻句:“天上的白云像棉花。”接着小明说暗喻句:“老师就是我的母亲。”之后小李说借喻句:“隆隆声(指代雷声)告诉我,要下大雨了。”这个材料仅仅记录了“说比喻句游戏”的简单经过,还没有记叙文的味道,
Writing is inseparable from the collection of materials, but the original material can not be copied into the composition intact. How to deal with the material? We can through the “oil” method to achieve. Below, we combine an example to explain. Look at the original material: that the game of metaphor sentences began, first of all, Xiaoxiao Illustrative metaphor: “white clouds like the sky.” Then Xiao Ming said: “teacher is my mother.” Xiao Li said Metaphors: “Rumble (referring to thunder) told me that it is going to rain. ” This material is only recorded, “said the game metaphor ” simple, there is no narrative taste,