小学作文教学是小学语文教学的重要组成部分。作文是学生认识世界、表现自我的具体体现,是学生语文知识和语文实践能力的综合表现,作文教学是语文教学的难点之一。由于各种原因,写作成了困扰语文教师和学生的一大难题。在教学中,学生作文没有少写,老师也没有少改,可是学生的作文水平 Primary school composition teaching is an important part of primary school Chinese teaching. Writing is a concrete manifestation of students ’understanding of the world and self-expression. It is a comprehensive expression of students’ language knowledge and ability of language practice. Composition teaching is one of the difficulties in language teaching. Due to various reasons, writing has become a major problem that plagued language teachers and students. In teaching, the students writing is not less writing, the teacher did not change less, but the students’ writing level