现在许多学生的作文千篇一律地关注自身,关注自己内心,很多是空洞华丽文字堆砌起来的空中楼阁,没有什么实际内容,更有甚也许又是郭敬明式的无端伤感。我们的教学并不要求当然也不可能把每个孩子都培养成作家。但是,在作文方面我们学生至少能写出真实的自我,真实的生活及感受。而学生怎样才能对生活有更深的体悟?就是要培养他们的悲悯情怀,人性关怀意识,能以深沉的忧思 Nowadays, many student essays focus on themselves without any concern for one another, paying close attention to one’s own innermost feelings. Many are empty pavilions filled with empty and gorgeous texts. There is no actual content. Perhaps even GJM’s senseless sadness. Our teaching does not, of course, require that every child be educated as a writer. However, in composition, our students can at least write down true self, real life and feelings. How can students have a deeper understanding of life, that is, to cultivate their compassion, the awareness of human nature, with deep sorrow