评委点评:小六、徐姑娘好似两个极端,一个清冷,一个奔放,但二者的心灵都是脆弱的,需要在偎依中取暖。所幸,她们在文中终有知己相伴。虽然晓熙在地址上留着山东青岛,但在细腻的倾诉中,我们还是不禁把她想象成一位静婉如玉的江南女孩。文章写友谊,写分别,但我认为最出彩的地方,还是对单二爷的刻画。小六与徐姑娘都有一种成熟的风韵,但在背后我们隐约还能看出一点影视的痕迹。而对单二爷,我想没有对生活的捕捉与对细节的揣摩,是不会写得如此惟妙惟肖的。如“南塘路缺了单二爷的问候显得有些仓促,大家总觉得出入少了些什么,潜意识觉 Judges Comments: Sixth, Xu girl is like two extremes, a cold, a bold, but both the heart is fragile, you need to warm snuggle. Fortunately, they are the accomplice in the text. Although Xiao Xi left Qingdao in Shandong Province on the address, we can not help but think of her as a jiangnan girl who is still jade. Articles write friendship, write separately, but I think the most brilliant place, or portrayed a single Erye. Little Six and Xu girl have a mature charm, but in the back of our vague can see a little film and television traces. As for the single Erye, I think it would not be so vivid to write about the capture of life and the speculation on details. Such as ”Nantang Road, the lack of a single Erye’s greeting seems a bit hasty, we always feel less access to what, subconsciously