在习作教学中,“好作品是改出来的”是一种被教者普遍认可的观点。在此种教学观点的影响下,学生写完习作之后,习作需经过一次又一次的修改就不可避免地成为了一种教学行为。对于写作这件事,我少年时写作的感受依然存留在记忆中,成年时的写作过程,现在每天都在经历着。因此,对“好作品是改出来的”这种观点,我更多的是持否定的态度,特别是对儿童写作这一块,更是不予 In the practice teaching, “good work is changed out ” is a kind of point of view generally accepted by the teacher. Under the influence of this kind of teaching viewpoint, after the student finishes the work of writing, the work needs to be revised again and again and inevitably becomes a kind of teaching behavior. For writing, I still feel in my childhood writing experience in memory, adult writing process, and now every day experiencing. Therefore, to the point that “good works are changed out ”, I am more of a negative attitude, especially in children’s writing, not to mention