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辩论报告是高考命题的热点。它一般会出现两个或两个以上的正反观点，并且要求我们发表自己的看法或者见解。针对其命题特点，特做出以下写作提示：
1. 在文章的起始段陈述辩论的主题；
2. 文章第二段要陈述赞同的观点及理由；
3. 文章第三段要陈述反对的观点及理由；
4. 文章末段阐明自己的观点。
下面是正反观点式议论文模板，请仔细阅读。
导入
第一段： Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should ..., Our opinions are divided on this topic.
正文
第二段： Most of the students are in favour of it. (正方观点)
Here are the reasons. First ... second ... finally ... (列出赞成的理由)
第三段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows, in the first place, what’s more, in addition ... (列出反对的理由)
结论
第四段：personally speaking, it will do us more harm than good, so ...
【演练】
每年高考后，高考状元都会被“热炒”。对这个现象，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你结合下表，围绕Should we give more attention to top-rated college entrance exam takers? 这一话题写一篇英语短文来介绍这一现象并给出自己的看法。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Every year after the college entrance exam, the top-rated exam takers will attract wide attention from all over the country ...
【习作一】
They may find themselves surrounded by various interviews and social activities. But recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should be more concentrated on the top-rated exam takers. Our opinions are divided on this topic.
Most of the students are in favour of it, Here are the reasons. First, this can make the public realize the importance of education and regard it as a necessary aspect of our life. That education plays an important and necessary part in life will be accepted widely.
Secondly, paying more attention to the top-rated takers will set a good example to a great number of students. It inspires those who want to cheer their achievements.
However, the others are strongly against it. Their reasons are as follows. In the first place, the top-rated exam takers become more and more worried and nervous with unnecessary attention paid to them. In addition, high marks don’t necessarily mean strong abilities.
In my opinion, it’s all right to give proper attention to those top winners, which will benefit their future development.（江夏一中王敏）
【点评】
文章使用了很多高级词汇，如be surrounded by, concentrate on, play a part in, set an example to，体现了对动词词组的灵活运用，高级词汇的使用也体现了作者扎实的语言功底。在句式上，作者使用了That education plays an important and necessary part in life will be accepted widely这个主语从句，It inspires those who want to cheer their achievements这个定语从句，it’s all right to give proper attention to those top winners, which will benefit their future development 这个非限制性定语从句，以及with unnecessary attention paid to 这个with引导的复合结构，使得全文观点明确，条理清晰，表达流畅，另外几个衔接词的使用，如Their reasons are as follows， In the first place, In addition使得文章连贯自如。
【习作二】
Here are the opinions which are devided into two parts. Most people are in favor of it. For it can promote people to attach great importance to education. In addition, it will set a great example to all the students, which is good to their further study.
However, as an old saying goes, each coin has its two sides. There are also many people who are against it. On one hand, with too much attention, the top-rated students will feel stressed out, which does harm to their own lives. On the other hand, high marks are not the symbols of strong abilities.
Personally speaking, I have the agreement with those who are against it. Not only should we model after them, but also we should give them more space and freedom instead of excessive attention.
（江夏一中廖文茜）
【点评】
这篇文章跟上篇文章一样，涵盖了所有的内容要点，层次清楚，行文流畅。首先它使用了很多高级词汇，比如promote, attach importance to, do harm to, set a good example to, as an old saying goes, do harm to, be stressed out， 显示了作者良好的语言功底。同时，作者使用了较为复杂的句式，如with too much attention, the top-rated students will feel stressed out, which does harm to their own lives， 这是with 所引导的复合结构及which 引导的非限制性定语从句；还有Not only should we model after them, but also we should give them more space and freedom instead of excessive attention。倒装句型的使用使得文章变得更加生动。作者灵活多变的表达方式，为全文增色不少。
【范文】
Some people say “yes” to this phenomenon. They think, for one thing, it can make more people care about education; for another, those top students can and do set good examples to the rest of the students.
However, others hold opposite opinions about this. They believe that giving too much attention to those top winners can do more harm than good to them. Meanwhile, high marks don’t necessarily mean strong ability.
In my opinion, it’s all right to give proper attention to those top winners, but we shouldn’t pay too much attention to them. After all, exams and marks aren’t everything.
1. 在文章的起始段陈述辩论的主题；
2. 文章第二段要陈述赞同的观点及理由；
3. 文章第三段要陈述反对的观点及理由；
4. 文章末段阐明自己的观点。
下面是正反观点式议论文模板，请仔细阅读。
导入
第一段： Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should ..., Our opinions are divided on this topic.
正文
第二段： Most of the students are in favour of it. (正方观点)
Here are the reasons. First ... second ... finally ... (列出赞成的理由)
第三段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows, in the first place, what’s more, in addition ... (列出反对的理由)
结论
第四段：personally speaking, it will do us more harm than good, so ...
【演练】
每年高考后，高考状元都会被“热炒”。对这个现象，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你结合下表，围绕Should we give more attention to top-rated college entrance exam takers? 这一话题写一篇英语短文来介绍这一现象并给出自己的看法。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Every year after the college entrance exam, the top-rated exam takers will attract wide attention from all over the country ...
【习作一】
They may find themselves surrounded by various interviews and social activities. But recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should be more concentrated on the top-rated exam takers. Our opinions are divided on this topic.
Most of the students are in favour of it, Here are the reasons. First, this can make the public realize the importance of education and regard it as a necessary aspect of our life. That education plays an important and necessary part in life will be accepted widely.
Secondly, paying more attention to the top-rated takers will set a good example to a great number of students. It inspires those who want to cheer their achievements.
However, the others are strongly against it. Their reasons are as follows. In the first place, the top-rated exam takers become more and more worried and nervous with unnecessary attention paid to them. In addition, high marks don’t necessarily mean strong abilities.
In my opinion, it’s all right to give proper attention to those top winners, which will benefit their future development.（江夏一中王敏）
【点评】
文章使用了很多高级词汇，如be surrounded by, concentrate on, play a part in, set an example to，体现了对动词词组的灵活运用，高级词汇的使用也体现了作者扎实的语言功底。在句式上，作者使用了That education plays an important and necessary part in life will be accepted widely这个主语从句，It inspires those who want to cheer their achievements这个定语从句，it’s all right to give proper attention to those top winners, which will benefit their future development 这个非限制性定语从句，以及with unnecessary attention paid to 这个with引导的复合结构，使得全文观点明确，条理清晰，表达流畅，另外几个衔接词的使用，如Their reasons are as follows， In the first place, In addition使得文章连贯自如。
【习作二】
Here are the opinions which are devided into two parts. Most people are in favor of it. For it can promote people to attach great importance to education. In addition, it will set a great example to all the students, which is good to their further study.
However, as an old saying goes, each coin has its two sides. There are also many people who are against it. On one hand, with too much attention, the top-rated students will feel stressed out, which does harm to their own lives. On the other hand, high marks are not the symbols of strong abilities.
Personally speaking, I have the agreement with those who are against it. Not only should we model after them, but also we should give them more space and freedom instead of excessive attention.
（江夏一中廖文茜）
【点评】
这篇文章跟上篇文章一样，涵盖了所有的内容要点，层次清楚，行文流畅。首先它使用了很多高级词汇，比如promote, attach importance to, do harm to, set a good example to, as an old saying goes, do harm to, be stressed out， 显示了作者良好的语言功底。同时，作者使用了较为复杂的句式，如with too much attention, the top-rated students will feel stressed out, which does harm to their own lives， 这是with 所引导的复合结构及which 引导的非限制性定语从句；还有Not only should we model after them, but also we should give them more space and freedom instead of excessive attention。倒装句型的使用使得文章变得更加生动。作者灵活多变的表达方式，为全文增色不少。
【范文】
Some people say “yes” to this phenomenon. They think, for one thing, it can make more people care about education; for another, those top students can and do set good examples to the rest of the students.
However, others hold opposite opinions about this. They believe that giving too much attention to those top winners can do more harm than good to them. Meanwhile, high marks don’t necessarily mean strong ability.
In my opinion, it’s all right to give proper attention to those top winners, but we shouldn’t pay too much attention to them. After all, exams and marks aren’t everything.