莫志勇书友的草书作品,形式上比较完整,用笔灵动,自然流畅。整体上注意到了体量、疏密的对比关系,看来作者对草书下过一番苦工夫,有自己独特的理解。美中不足之处,是作者只照顾了行气,却忽略了行与行之间的关系,疏密对比的运用也有待于仔细推敲。再者,款字稍显草率、拥挤。希望作者要继续加强对古代作品的临习,创作出更好的作品! Mo Zhiyong Shuzong cursive works, the form is relatively complete, smart with a pen, natural and smooth. As a whole, I noticed the contrastive relationship between mass and density. It seems that the author has had some unique understanding of cursive efforts. The fly in the ointment is that the author only takes care of the mood, but ignores the relationship between the line and the line, the use of density contrast also needs to be carefully scrutinized. Moreover, the paragraph slightly sloppy, crowded. I hope the author should continue to strengthen the practice of ancient works, to create a better work!