进入小学中年级后,写作成为孩子们进行自我表达的一个重要方式。他们通过作文展示自己对世界的认识和理解。女儿上三年级后,在老师的要求下写了一些作文。这些文章称不上多好,但都是她自己独立完成的,而且写作过程中不打草稿。我认为这是一种非常好的写作习惯,一气呵成地表达自己的想法。但是,随着老师的批改,女儿的一气呵成大不如前了。女儿在《美丽的 After entering middle school, writing becomes an important way for children to express themselves. Through composition, they show their understanding and understanding of the world. After her third year in grade, she wrote some compositions at the teacher’s request. These articles can not be said to be good, but they are all done by themselves, and the writing process is not drafted. I think this is a very good writing habit to express one’s thoughts in one go. However, with the teacher’s amendment, the daughter’s breathless success. Daughter is "beautiful