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★评委意见:善于讲故事,从容,有许多鲜活的细节,以松鼠来叙述,充满了新奇的想象力。语言流畅,节奏感好。表达了深情与困惑。松鼠的故事,其实也是人类自己常常面临的难题:成为自愿而自由的囚徒,面临爱与束缚的选择,天命的无奈……(严修鸿)过去的那一天清晨,万籁俱寂。几缕调皮的阳光透过密密匝匝的枝叶钻了进来。晶莹剔透的露珠顺着,着柔暖的光抚摸着我的皮毛。雨后空气中夹杂着泥土与青草的芳香。我慵懒地睁开了惺忪的睡眼,循着和煦
★ Judge Opinion: Good at telling the story, calm, there are many vivid details, narrated by squirrels, full of novelty imagination. Language fluency, good sense of rhythm. Expressed affectionate and confused. The story of squirrels is actually a common problem faced by mankind himself: becoming a prisoner of voluntariness and freedom, facing the choice of love and bondage, the helplessness of destiny ... (Yan Xiuhong) On the early morning of that past, all the silence was silenced. Several strands of naughty sunshine through the dense branches of the turns came. Crystal clear dew down, with a soft light caress touch my fur. After the rain mixed with the smell of earth and grass in the air. I lazily opened my sleepy eyes, following the warmth