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Summer vacation is coming. I have made some plans about it.
During the vacation， I will make sure that the diet is regular and suitable. And I will keep exercising for about half an hour every day. I think they will be good for my health. Besides， I want to preview what we are going to learn. Preview can make us feel relaxed when we learn new knowledge. And preview can also improve our selfstudy ability. After finishing studying， I will also go somewhere interesting. I think visiting some places of interest can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge level.
What do you think of my summer vacation plan？
教師点评：
这是一篇学生介绍自己暑假计划的习作。作者从健康饮食与运动、预习新课、参观名胜三个方面具体介绍了她的暑假安排。全文层次清晰，用词准确，语句通顺，关联词及复合句、祈使句的使用体现了作者扎实的语言功底。
（指导教师：赵耀卫）
During the vacation， I will make sure that the diet is regular and suitable. And I will keep exercising for about half an hour every day. I think they will be good for my health. Besides， I want to preview what we are going to learn. Preview can make us feel relaxed when we learn new knowledge. And preview can also improve our selfstudy ability. After finishing studying， I will also go somewhere interesting. I think visiting some places of interest can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge level.
What do you think of my summer vacation plan？
教師点评：
这是一篇学生介绍自己暑假计划的习作。作者从健康饮食与运动、预习新课、参观名胜三个方面具体介绍了她的暑假安排。全文层次清晰，用词准确，语句通顺，关联词及复合句、祈使句的使用体现了作者扎实的语言功底。
（指导教师：赵耀卫）