近年来,确实出現了許多优秀的詩篇,作为一个文艺爱好者,我衷心的感謝为我国詩歌的繁荣而积極劳动的詩人們。与此同时,我很遺憾的注意到:有的詩人还不是踏踏实实地深入生活,仔仔細細地观察事物,因此,写出來的詩,尽管主题明确,結构巧妙,却往往因一两句話的不真实而影响到整篇詩歌的完美,甚至使人看后發生怀疑。为了说明问题,不妨举詩为証: In recent years, there have been many outstanding poems. As a literary enthusiast, I sincerely thank the poets who have worked actively for the prosperity of our country’s poetry. At the same time, I am very sorry to note that some poets are not really stepping into life and observing things carefully. Therefore, even though the subject is clear and the structure is ingenious, poetry written is often due to one or two sentences. The unreality of the poem influences the perfection of the entire poem, and even makes people look after suspicions. To illustrate the problem, you may wish to raise your poetry as proof: