辅导点拨:小作者向大家讲述了在课堂上发生一件事,详细具体,写出了自己的感受,以及从中获得的收获。语言流畅,表达清晰,可见语言功底之深。“铃铃……铃铃……”一阵风吹过,充满着岁月的气息,那风铃又响了起来。一阵阵悦耳的铃声,直沁我们的心脾。这般动听的铃声,总会让我想起,曾几何时,我成长道路上的那一串风铃。 Counseling tips: the author tells you about what happened in the classroom, detailed and specific, write your own feelings, as well as the gains derived from. Language fluency, clear expression, we can see the depth of language skills. “Bell ... bell ... ” a gust of wind blowing, full of years of breath, the wind bell rang again. A burst of melodious ringtones, straight Qin our heart. Such a pleasant ring tone, always reminds me of what time, I grew up on the road that the wind chimes.