初中英语作文训练是英语课堂上指导学生进行语言输出的一项关键任务,而作文评讲是这项关键任务中非常重要的一环。但这一环节常常被教师所忽视,他们往往只注重对课堂上写作的指导和课下作文的批改。要想提高学生的作文水平,教师出色的作文评讲是必不可少的。教师的评讲就像指引学生前进的明亮灯塔,不仅能让学生认识到他们的习作中可圈可点之处和不足之处,更能大大提升学生的写作热情。第一阶段:教师批阅,学生改进 Junior high school essay writing training is one of the key tasks in English class to guide students in their language output. Writing essay commentary is a very important part of this key task. However, this aspect is often overlooked by teachers who tend to focus only on instruction in writing in the class and on correcting compositions in writing. In order to improve students’ writing skills, excellent essay commentary by teachers is essential. Teachers’ comments are like bright lighthouses guiding students forward. They not only enable students to recognize the merits and shortcomings of their assignments, but also greatly enhance their passion for writing. The first stage: teacher review, student improvement