辅导点拨用心去生活,其实生活很有趣作者能够对蜗牛如此用心地观察,并写下自己的观霾察所得,很了不起。在平实的语言中,读者仿佛能够看到一个很有爱心、好奇心的孩子。2015年9月30日星期三天气:雨一场秋雨过后,校园内外都湿漉漉的。下午放学后,李吴林、韩诗诺、吕媛媛邀我一起去捉蜗牛。我们走出大门,李昊林快步奔向花圃,把头弯了进去。我心里很是开心,也学着他的样子,希望能找到一只蜗牛。没一会儿,李吴林喊:“我捉到蜗牛了!”我看了看,说: Counseling dial with the heart to live, in fact, life is very interesting The author can snail so carefully observed, and write down their own observations haze observation, great. In plain language, readers seem to be able to see a very caring, curious child. Wednesday, September 30, 2015 WEATHER: After a rain, the school is wet on both inside and outside. Afternoon school, Li Wu Lin, Han Sainuo, Lv Yuanyuan invited me to catch snails. We walked out of the door, Li Haolin walked quickly toward the flower garden, bent his head into it. My heart is very happy, but also learn his way, hoping to find a snail. A moment later, Li Wu Lin shouted: “I caught a snail! ” I looked and said: