随文练笔已成为小学语文写作教学中的一种重要教学方式。教师应该充分发挥随文练笔的有效评价功能,对学生习作做出真实的、有意义的评价,捕捉其中的亮点,激发学生的兴趣;发现其中的问题,启发引导学生进步;走进学生的心灵,与他们用心交谈。 With the practice pen has become an important teaching method in Chinese writing in primary schools. Teachers should give full play to the effective evaluation function of writing with the practice of writing to make a real, meaningful evaluation of student work, to capture the bright spots in them, to stimulate students ’interest; to find out the problems, to inspire and guide the students to progress; to walk into the students’ minds Talk to them carefully.