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Mum, I want to say that sometimes it is really tiring to be a good daughter of yours. Misunderstanding often exists between you and me. Do you still remember, one morning, after finishing my homework? I was about to call Jerry, one of my best friends, when you shouted from the kitchen, “Yu, it’s time you practiced your playing piano now!” I became unhappy and replied, “It’s Sunday today and I want to have a rest! Besides, I practiced playing for two hours yesterday afternoon.” But you didn’t listen to my explanation and went straight to me, saying, “Tomorrow you’ll have a test in it. If you fail, don’t blame me for not reminding you.” I had no choice but to go back to the piano.
The other day, I was drawing a picture when the phone rang. It was one of my classmates who invited me to take part in her birthday party being held at her home. Putting down the receiver, I went to the living room, where you and Dad were watching TV, to ask for permission. Dad said, “OK. If you had done what you should do, you may go.” Hearing that, I jumped with joy. But you stopped me as usual and said, “It’s dark at night, and You are still young. It’s too dangerous for a girl like you to walk alone on such a dark night.” “But I am 17 now and ...” I tried to reason with you, but It’s useless. You told me that I must have a good rest and I must go to bed early that night.
Standing there for quite a while, I said nothing, with tears filling my eyes!
My dear mum, you always say that you love me and that what you have done is only for my good! I know that you doesn’t lie to me, but you doesn’t really understand me. Things that seem “good” to you aren’t always “good” to me. Mum , do you really know me? I dream for more understanding!
教师评语： 小作者用细腻的笔触，流畅的语言表达出对父母理解的渴望。通过两个例子作者说明了母亲和自己之间所存在的一些“代沟”问题。文章多次正确地使用到较复杂的长句和非谓语动词，再加上第二人称的使用，使整篇文章读起来亲切感人。
(指导教师： 孙玉兰)
The other day, I was drawing a picture when the phone rang. It was one of my classmates who invited me to take part in her birthday party being held at her home. Putting down the receiver, I went to the living room, where you and Dad were watching TV, to ask for permission. Dad said, “OK. If you had done what you should do, you may go.” Hearing that, I jumped with joy. But you stopped me as usual and said, “It’s dark at night, and You are still young. It’s too dangerous for a girl like you to walk alone on such a dark night.” “But I am 17 now and ...” I tried to reason with you, but It’s useless. You told me that I must have a good rest and I must go to bed early that night.
Standing there for quite a while, I said nothing, with tears filling my eyes!
My dear mum, you always say that you love me and that what you have done is only for my good! I know that you doesn’t lie to me, but you doesn’t really understand me. Things that seem “good” to you aren’t always “good” to me. Mum , do you really know me? I dream for more understanding!
教师评语： 小作者用细腻的笔触，流畅的语言表达出对父母理解的渴望。通过两个例子作者说明了母亲和自己之间所存在的一些“代沟”问题。文章多次正确地使用到较复杂的长句和非谓语动词，再加上第二人称的使用，使整篇文章读起来亲切感人。
(指导教师： 孙玉兰)