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名家PAN PING 说到2008年,大部分同学想到的无非是城市的变化、奥运健儿的夺冠、先进科技的运用……诸如此类。丛韫同学的这篇作文选了一个崭新的角度,讲的是“人”的更化,人的精神面貌、人的生活目标、人的生命质量如何在奥运精神的鼓舞下焕发光彩,得到提升。在一篇小学生的作文中,能够把目光从外部转移到内部,以人为本,关注心灵,是难能可贵的。作者的文字简洁流畅,质朴中不无幽默,应该说是写作中比较高的境界,是小文章中的大智慧。作文不长,却条理清楚地分出了一、二、三、四几个章节,应该是小作者的匠心独具。章节的标题起得也好,概括性强,朗朗上口。其中“一”、“三”两章。更写得风趣横生,令人忍俊不禁。
Famous PAN PING said in 2008, most students think nothing more than the changes in the city, the Olympic athletes win, the use of advanced technology ... and so on. Cong Cong students selected this essay a brand new perspective, talking about the “human” more, the human face, people's life goals, how the quality of human life under the inspiration of the Olympic Games glow, be promoted . In a primary school student's essay, it is commendable to be able to look away from the outside to the inside, people-oriented, and focus on the soul. The author's text is concise and fluent, plain without humor, it should be said that writing is a relatively high realm, is a great wisdom in a small article. Composition is not long, but clearly divided into one, two, three, four chapters, should be a small author's ingenuity. The title of the chapter has played well, very general, catchy. One “one”, “three” two chapters. Write more funny, it can not help but laugh.