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学会写标题是盆景作者的一项基本功。因为在一般的新闻业务中,制作标题主要是报纸编辑的工作,可盆景的标题却非作者自已敲定不可!因此。给盆景制作标题,轻视不得。如潘仲连的《一介匹夫》,赵庆泉的《八骏图》,花汉民的《饱览人间春色》等等。标题所起的作用,除了精炼概括、明确主题大意外,更起一种欣赏导向的作用。但是,盆景标题制作不能太具体、太明确,现实针对性要尽量弱一些。如《一介匹夫》倘改为“国家兴亡、匹夫有责”就显得浅露丁;《八骏图》也不能题为《刀枪入库,马放南山》,或者《林茂草肥马儿壮》。有件作品(在贵刊登过照片和文章)叫《家多小水电》,针对性实在强烈得无以复加。如改成《夜明珠》该多好呢?观众会再三品味、寻觅。而当时,我们记得,一见标题,就不想再去探胜,因为已知“内有小水电”了。作者不
Learn to write a title is a bonsai author’s basic skills. Because in the general news business, the production of the title is mainly newspaper editors work, but the title of the bonsai but not the authors themselves can not be finalized! Bonsai title to make no contempt. Such as Pan Zhonglian’s “a section of each husband,” Zhao Qingquan’s “Eight Chun map” Han flower Han people “to enjoy the spring color” and so on. The role of the title, in addition to refining the generalization of a clear theme of the accident, but also play a role in appreciation-oriented. However, the title of bonsai production can not be too specific, too clear, the reality of targeted to be as weak as possible. Such as “a section of a husband,” If the switch to “the rise and fall of the country, every man has the responsibility,” it appears light Luding; “Eight Chun map” can not be titled “knife and storage, Nanshan horse” or “ . A piece of work (published in your magazine photos and articles) is called ”home more small hydropower,“ targeted very strong and can not be added. If changed to ”Night Pearl“ how good it? The audience will taste again, looking for. At that time, we remembered that once we saw the title, we did not want to go there because we knew that ”there was a small hydropower inside". Author not