草书杜甫《客至》条幅吉翔宇(陕西):此作者有草书的情结,通篇线条老练,可谓一气呵成。习草要去精通草法,并要去熟记和训练,第一行的“皆”字如写成草法,效果更好。另“客”的写法也有待商榷,整体的两个长竖过于雷同和多余,在一幅作品中,有一个长线条点缀一下是锦上添花,然用多了就没有意思了。块面感还不是太强,要有抓人眼球的东西,视觉冲击再强调一下,比如可以几处精彩的涨墨来完成。作者优点:敢写,胆大。再夯实根基,定有大的收获。 Cursive Du Fu “guest to” banner Ji Xiang Yu (Shaanxi): This writer has a cursive complex, throughout the line of sophisticated, can be described as one. Weeding to be proficient in grass law, and go to memorize and training, the first line of “all ” If written as grass, the effect is better. Another “guest ” wording has yet to be discussed, the overall two verticals too similar and redundant, in a piece of work, there is a long line of embellishment is icing on the cake, but more useless is meaningless. Block feeling is not too strong, there must be caught eyeballs, visual impact and then emphasize, for example, can be a few wonderful ink to complete. Author advantages: dare to write, bold. Reinforce the foundation, there will be a big harvest.