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从事文字秘书工作30多年来,我深深地感到,修改实在是写作过程中的重要一环。不管是起草文稿,还是业余写新闻报道和文学作品,都丝毫不能忽视修改。我之所以数十年坚持不懈,主要是得益于古今名家的真传。起初我并不认为修改有多么重要,我的良师益友、现任河南省委副秘书长的杨子江曾赠我契诃夫的一句名言:“写作的技巧,其实不是写作的技巧,而是删掉不好的地方的技巧。”之后,这成了我写作的座右铭。现任河南省委副秘书长的尹宏隽在讲写作时曾引用过一个小故事:诗人梦家将他的诗寄给胡适修改,诗中有这样两句:“鸟莫许唱,清溪停了不流！”胡适改成了“鸟不许唱,清溪停了莫流！”胡适只是把第一句中的“莫”与第二句中的“不”互换了位置,便使两句都成了命令语气,增强了抒情性。这更使我笔耕不亵一字师,执著追求情独钟。
For more than 30 years as a text secretary, I feel deeply that revision is really an important part of the writing process. Whether it is drafting manuscripts or writing amateur news stories and literary works, we can not ignore the amendment at all. The reason why I persevere for decades, mainly due to ancient and modern masters of the truth. At first I did not think how important the changes were. My mentor, Yang Zijiang, now deputy secretary general of Henan Provincial Committee, once gave me a famous quote from Chekhov: “Writing skills are actually not writing skills, but they are deleted badly The skills of the place. ”After that, it became my motto for writing. Yin Hongjun, now deputy secretary general of Henan Provincial Committee, used to quote a little story in her writing: The poet Meng Jia sent his poem to Hu Shih for editing. There are two verses in this poem: “ Hu Shi changed into a ”birds are allowed to sing, the stream stopped Mo flow!“ Hu Shi just the first sentence of ”Mo“ and the second sentence of ”no" interchangeable position, so that both sentences Become command tone, enhanced lyricism. This makes me even more penmanship profane teacher, dedicated pursuit of love alone bell.