自从班上组织小雪花文学社以来,萍萍踊跃写稿,已经有了不小的进步,范老师更是看在眼里,喜在心头。只是萍萍在拟订作文题目上,好像仍是不太讲究。今天,萍萍在同学云云的陪同下,又拿着刚写好的作文《妈妈看病记》来到老师办公室,老师一看《妈妈看病记》这个题目太平淡,太直白,于是范老师告诉她拟个好题目,很有讲究。题目是文章的眼睛。好的题目简洁明了,生动 Since the organization organized a small snowflake literary club, Ping Ping enthusiastic writing, there has been no small improvement, Fan teacher is in the eyes of the eyes, hi heart. Just Ping Ping in the development of essay topic, it seems still not very particular about. Today, Pingping, accompanied by his classmates, also took the newly-written essay “Mom’s Doctor’s Note” to the teacher’s office. The teacher looked at the topic of “Doctor’s Doctor’s Note” too plain and too straightforward, so Teacher Fan told She wants a good topic, very particular about. The title is the article’s eyes. Good topic concise, vivid