作文评语就是针对学生的作文,提出优缺点,并分析原因或给予提示的话。教师应充分发挥作文评语的多种功能,促进学生习作水平的不断提升。一“、智慧树”:指明写作方向优秀的评语就像一棵智慧树,把智慧之果送给孩子们品尝,为他们开启智慧之门,指明写作方向。学生小王在一篇作文中记叙了自己和伙伴约好周末去骑车远足,结果伙伴们全都爽约的事。此文文从字顺,但写法过 Essay writing is directed at the composition of students, put forward their advantages and disadvantages, and analyze the reasons or give tips. Teachers should give full play to the multiple functions of composition and comment, and promote the continuous improvement of students’ working level. A “wisdom tree”: the direction of writing excellent reviews like a tree of wisdom, the fruit of wisdom to the children to taste, open the door to wisdom for them, indicate the direction of writing. Student Xiao Wang in an essay recounts his appointment with a partner to ride a bicycle on a weekend hiking, the results of all the partners are cool. This article from the word Shun, but writing too