点评这是一篇有感而发的读后感,作者在钦佩张海迪的同时,能从自身出发,拓宽视野,由自己的梦想到大家的梦,进而想到中国梦,由此可见,小作者不仅是一个积极乐观的人,还是一个有志向,有追求,有抱负的人,值得称道。行文中语言优美,思路清晰,重点突出。联想和对比也运用得较为得当。(指导老师:李峰)午后,我坐在阳台上,看完了张海迪的自传《轮椅上的梦》,不经意间,泪水已模糊了双眼。我想:张海迪 Comments This is a sense of read after feeling, while admiring Zhang Haidi, the author can proceed from their own, broaden their horizons, from their dreams to everyone’s dream, and then think of the Chinese dream, we can see that the author is not only a Positive and optimistic person, or a aspiring, aspiring, aspiring person, commendable. The language of a beautiful language, clear thinking, focused. Lenovo and contrast are also used more appropriately. (Instructor: Li Feng) In the afternoon, I sat on the balcony, reading Zhang Di Di’s autobiography “wheelchair dream”, inadvertently, tears have blurred his eyes. I think: Zhang Haidi