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点评本文是一篇实力派议论文,其实力显现于两个方面:一是“理直”。其因有三:①题目亮出观点,单刀直入,不绕弯子;②作者直陈亮剑的理由、背景、意义,直抒胸臆,快人快语;③引述的名言句句直击题旨,言之凿凿,不容置疑。二是“气壮”。其因有三:①在意旨上,不为空言,力求矫世;②在论证上,扬古人之清,激现世之浊;③在用例上,有范仲淹、鲁迅、谭嗣同等列位硬汉助阵,音犹在
Comments This article is a strength to send papers, its strength is manifested in two aspects: First, “Risheng ”. The reason is that there are three: ① the topic highlights the point of view, single-handedly straight, not around the bend; ② the author straight Chen Liang sword reason, background, meaning, straight expression, fast people fast language; ③ quotations of famous words straight hit the purpose of the words conclusive, no doubt. Second, “sturdy ”. The reasons are as follows: (1) In terms of purpose, not empty words, and strive to make the world; ② In the argument, the ancients of the Qing Dynasty, excite the world of turbidness; ③ In use cases, Fan Zhongyan, Lu Xun, Tan Sitong, Sound still