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多年担任高考语文阅卷组长的何永康教授说:“凡高考优秀作文,必须有‘光辉’,没有‘太阳’,总得有个‘月亮’;没有‘月亮’,总得有个‘星星’;没有‘星星’,总得有个‘萤火虫’吧!如果连‘萤火虫’都没有,那只能在‘基础等级’徘徊了。”“亮点”已然是考场作文的杀手锏,在作文实践中,怎样运用自己的慧心巧思,对文章“略施粉黛”“巧改罗裙”?我在教学实践中发现,让学生多修改自己的文章是一条不错的途径。
Professor He Yongkang, who has been serving as the leader of the college entrance examination for many years, said: “Every college entrance essay must have a glorious essay. There is no sun. There must be a moon. Without the moon, there must be a star. Without ’stars’, there must be a ’firefly’. If you do not even have fireflies, you can only hover at the ’basic level.’ ”“ Highlights ”is already the killer of the essay composition, , How to use their own ingenuity ingenuity on the article “slightly applied pink ” “clever Luo skirt ”? I found in teaching practice, allowing students to modify their articles more is a good way.