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一、拓宽视野要拓宽视野也并非就是一定要带领农村的孩子走出农村,去欣赏更大的世界。而是学会观察周围的世界,学会累计生活素材。也就是使得作文内容丰富、充实起来的方法。首先,拓展应该从身边开始,培养起学生善于观察周遭的点点滴滴开始。当然这只是第一步。徐特立先生曾说:“不动笔墨不读书。”所以做好平时片段记录与描写片段是十分必要和重要的。比如在以“写给父母的一封信”为主题的写作中,许多同学就广泛地出现了内容空泛的问题。整篇作文除了写对父母的感谢,就是格式化的感叹:“爸爸妈妈我爱你们”。而如果在平时就有记录与父母在一起发生的点滴,再将这种事例融入到作文中,那么文章自然读起来真
First, to broaden their horizons To broaden their horizons nor is it necessary to lead rural children out of the countryside to enjoy the larger world. Instead, they learn to observe the world around them and learn to accumulate living resources. That is to say, the essay is enriched and enriched. First of all, the expansion should start from the side and train students to be good at observing the surrounding areas. Of course this is only the first step. Mr. Xu Teli once said: “Do not move without reading pen.” Therefore, it is necessary and important to do a good job of recording and describing the usual clips. For example, in the writing entitled “A Letter to Parents”, many of the students are experiencing widespread problems in content. In addition to writing the entire essay thanked his parents, is formatted sigh: “Mom and Dad I love you ”. And if in peacetime there are records of what happened with their parents bit by bit, then this case into the composition, then the article naturally read really