作文是学生心灵对话、生命独白、情感宣泄、个性表达的过程,然而教师长期困扰于应试教育模式,写作被异化,成为应试的敲门砖。家长从“作文训练”中寻找各种范文,学生在作文训练中疲于奔命,机械套用,学生作文未能取得长足的进步,反而出现集体“失语”的状态,假话、套话、空话多,丢失了真实情感,丧失了自我想象。一、初中作文失语症的主要表现1.内容选材上。(1)内容干瘪,言之无物。叙事只写故事提要,成了记流 Essay is the process of students’ spiritual dialogue, monologue of life, catharsis of emotion and expression of individuality. However, teachers have long plagued the examination-oriented education mode, and the writing has become alienated and become the exam-oriented stepping stone. Parents from the “writing training” to find all kinds of Pham Van, students exhausted in writing training, mechanical application, student essay failed to make significant progress, but the collective “aphasia ” state, lieutenant, metaphor, empty talk Lost more real emotions, loss of self-imagination. First, junior high school composition Aphasia main performance 1. Content selection. (1) The content is shriveled, nothing is said. Narrative only wrote the story summary, became a record flow