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四年级有一篇习作是这样的:在我们的生活中,有很多节日:春节、植树节、护士节、中秋节、重阳节……每个节日都寄托着人们美好的情感与愿望。假如让你按照自己的心愿设立一个节日,你会设立一个什么节日呢?赶快拿起笔.写出你心中的这个美好节日吧!对于这篇作文,我批改的重点放在内容上。通过无声的对话,给学生作文中流露的真情以深深的敬意。并借此告诉学生,作文技巧固然重要,但源自心灵深处的
There is an article written in the fourth grade like this: In our life, there are many festivals: Spring Festival, Arbor Day, Nurse Day, Mid-Autumn Festival, Chung Yeung Festival ... Every festival is entrusted with the good feelings and aspirations of the people. If you want to set up a festival according to your own wishes, what festival would you set up? Quickly pick up the pen. Write this wonderful festival in your heart! For this writing, I focus on the contents of the modification. Through silent dialogue, give deep respect to the truth revealed in the composition of students. And to tell students, composition skills are important, but from the depths of the soul