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[听我讲讲]亲爱的小朋友,学写麻雀作文常常要写事情,描述事情“一点通”是什么意思呢?就是要将完整的事情一步一步描述清楚,让读者看清事情的来龙去脉皂伽蚤。请你读一读作文《母鸡爱小鸡》的片段:“早晨,我看见母鸡带着一群小鸡,在草地上边玩边找食物。”这是描述母鸡带小鸡找食物的情景。接着,就要描述母鸡保护小鸡的事情:“忽然,来了一只小狗,面对小鸡汪汪乱叫。母鸡以为小狗要咬小鸡,立刻跑过去,狠狠地啄了一下小狗,小狗汪汪汪地叫着跑远了。”这是描述母鸡保护小鸡的事情。
[Listen to me] dear children, learn to write a sparrow essay often write things, describe things “One Touch ” What does it mean? Is to describe the whole thing step by step clear, let the reader see the context of things Soap gamma flea. Please read the essay “Hen Love Chick”: “In the morning I saw a hen with a bunch of chickens, playing on the grass and looking for food.” “This is a description of a hen with a chick looking for food The scene. Then, we will describe the hen to protect the chickens things: ”Suddenly, came a puppy, chickens barking in the face of chickens, hen that puppies biting chickens, immediately ran past, fiercely pecking A little puppy, puppy barking and running away. “” This is a description of hens to protect chicks.