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状物,是同学们在小学阶段应该掌握的写作方法。所谓状物,就是通过我们的文字描写,把事物再现出来,让读者读后,能在脑海中浮现出这一事物的具体形象。状物作文要写好,首先要把笔下的事物写得具体形象,还要写出事物的特点或不同之处,同时还要融入作者自己的情感和对事物的认识,从而打动、启发读者。从来稿情况看,同学们描写小动物,描写自己的小玩具、小物件的习作不少,但描写自然界事物,尤其是风雨雷电的,却并不多。本栏目这次选刊了两篇写雷雨的习作,都写得不错,能符合上述的要求。同学们可以看看,从中能受到哪些启发,得到什么借鉴。
Shape, is a class of students should master the writing method. The so-called object, that is, through our description of the words, to reproduce things, so that readers read, can emerge in my mind the specific image of this thing. To write good essay compositions, first of all, we should write down the specific things in the essay, and also write down the characteristics or differences of things. At the same time, we must integrate the author’s own feelings and understanding of things to impress readers. From the manuscript situation, students describe small animals, describe their own small toys, a lot of small objects of a lot of work, but the description of things in nature, especially the thunder and lightning, but not much. This section of the election of the two selected thunderstorm writing, are well written, to meet the above requirements. Students can see what inspiration from which to get what lessons.