设计理念我们在指导学生作文中发现,即使学生有了习作素材,写出来的作文仍然显得空洞,不够具体。究其根源,在于学生缺乏仔细观察周围事物的习惯,往往忽视自身的感受。新课程标准指出,要让学生“养成留心观察周围事物的习惯,有意识地丰富自己的见闻,珍视个人的独特感受,积累习作 Design concept We found in the guidance of students’ composition, even if the students have the materials, writing essay is still empty, not concrete enough. The root cause lies in the fact that students lack the habit of carefully observing the surrounding things and often neglect their own feelings. The new curriculum standard points out that for students to "develop the habit of observing the things around them, consciously enrich their own knowledge, cherish individual unique feelings and accumulate exercises