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中考作文中言辞偏激,认识偏差型文章大有存在,这是考场作文的一大忌讳,特别容易引起阅卷老师的反感而容易丢分。下面我们来看看一篇相关的病文,仔细分析,寻找其中的问题。【失误文展示】病态的教育(标语用语夸张,用“病态”一词,语言过激。)我的生活就像拍了一出戏,有超多的导演和编辑,用他们特有的语言,掌控我生活的情绪。他们的目的,美曰其名为培养国家栋梁之材,但我不知道他们心里是不是这样想的。听他们的教诲一直到现在,我的感觉明显在改变,也许这就是叛逆的开始,不过我更愿意说这是明辨事理的迹象。他们丑陋的嘴脸渐渐暴露出来,他们
Exaggerated rhetoric in senior high school entrance examination essay, understanding of the deviation of the article there, this is a taboo examination room essay, particularly prone to resentment of marking teacher easily drop points. Now let’s take a look at a related essay, analyze it carefully, and find out the problem. [Wrong text display] Morbid education (slogan exaggerated, use the word “morbid”, language excesses.) My life is like taking a play, with many supervisors and editors, using their own language , Control the emotions of my life. Their purpose, the United States said, was to nurture the pillars of the country, but I do not know if they thought so. Listening to their teachings Until now, my feelings have obviously changed. Perhaps this is the beginning of rebellion. However, I prefer to say that this is a sign of discerning things. Their ugly face gradually exposed them