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说到小学生作文的现状,可用喜忧参半来描述。除了部分尖子生作文水平较高外,大部分学生的作文水平令人担忧。主要是作文语言贫乏,千文一面;很多学生的作文是一拼二凑三模仿,作文内容尽是假话、大话、空话、废话;文章结构程式化。在学生们的作文中看不到生活的丰富多彩,看不到人性的真善美、假恶丑,更看不到孩子作文中应有的童真、童趣。
When it comes to the status of pupils’ compositions, they can be described in terms of mixed feelings. Apart from some of the top amateur writing, the composition level of most students is worrying. Mainly lack of writing language, thousands of text side; a lot of students’ writing is a combination of two make three imitations, writing content is full of lies, bullshit, empty talk, nonsense; stylistic structure of the article. In the composition of students can not see the rich and colorful life, can not see the beauty of human nature, fake and ugly, but can not see the children’s writing should be childlike, childlike.